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Persoa que publicou o fío: redred
chica nueva
chica nueva
Local time: 02:16
Chinese to English
definite article 'the' May 22, 2009

redred wrote:
@lai an, 加the的情况比不加之时要多。另外,按照the的法则,下述的monkeys(通用型,没特指的事物)我就没加the. 看来ginseng, melanoma与monkeys一样情况?

Scientists conducted an analysis to the ingredients of the wild fruits, ...
... which is a crucial role to determine the figure of monkeys.

[Edited at 2009-05-22 02:31 GMT]


the: No, I don't think so. 'ginseng' is uncountable, 'melanoma' can be countable or uncountable (but is uncountable here), so they don't take 'the'. Monkeys are countable

另外:conducted an analysis to -》conduct an analysis on; figure = (人的)身材?


[Edited at 2009-05-22 06:18 GMT]


 
nigerose
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China
Local time: 21:16
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+ ...
开玩笑 May 22, 2009

redred,关于consummate,我是和你开玩笑的。在你这里的广告文字中,可以大胆使用。吹牛不犯法,呵呵。
上面一段英文,不太像科技英文。


 
chica nueva
chica nueva
Local time: 02:16
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人参 Ginseng text, my try. May 30, 2009

redred wrote:

人参有“草药之王”的美誉,一直以来被认为是滋养极品。据第一部药学经典《神农草本着作》记载,人参有滋补五脏,安神,抗悸动,避邪,明目,益智,减肥和延长寿命的功效。千百年来,人参被誉为草药珍品。
...

1 Known as “King of Herbs”, Ginseng is considered as foremost nutriment both in the ancient and modern times. As recorded in the first classics of medication, Classics of Shennong Herbs, “ginseng has the function of nourishing the five internal organs, calming spirit and soul, resisting palpitate with fear, dismissing evil influence, brightening eyes and benefiting wisdom, losing weight and prolonging life span.” For thousands of years, ginseng has been honored as precious herb which can make people immoral.
...

2 Known as the “King of Herbs”, the ginseng is considered as the foremost nutriment both in the ancient and modern times. As recorded in the first medical masterpiece of Shennong's Classic of Materia Medica, “the ginseng has the function of nourishing the five internal organs, calming down the mood of dysphoria, comforting palpitation, enhancing intelligence, brightening up eyes and benefiting wisdom, as well as losing weight and prolonging life span.” Over thousands of years, the ginseng has been honored as a precious herb.
...


[ http://yndali.en.ecplaza.net/5.asp Translation 1
http://4en.veduchina.com/html/53/n-2353.html
Shennong Emperor's Classic of Materia Medica《神农本草经》]

3 Ginseng is known as the "King of the Herbs" and has always been considered to be a superior food. China's first classic of pharmacology, the "Shennong Bencao Jing" records that ginseng is efficacious in nourishing the five internal organs [heart, liver, spleen, lungs, kidneys], calming the mind and spirit, countering nervous palpitations, warding off unhealthy influences, brightening the eyes, benefitting the wits, assisting weight reduction, and increasing longevity. Right down through the ages, gingeng has enjoyed a reputation as a herb-treasure.

Sentence 1: 人参有“草药之王”的美誉,一直以来被认为是滋养极品。
Known as “King of Herbs”, Ginseng is considered as foremost nutriment both in the ancient and modern times.
Known as the “King of Herbs”, the ginseng is considered as the foremost nutriment both in the ancient and modern times.
Ginseng is known as "King of the Herbs" and has always been considered to be a superior food.

Sentence 2: 据第一部药学经典《神农草本着作》记载,人参有滋补五脏,安神,抗悸动,避邪,明目,益智,减肥和延长寿命的功效。
As recorded in the first classics of medication, Classics of Shennong Herbs, “ginseng has the function of nourishing the five internal organs, calming spirit and soul, resisting palpitate with fear, dismissing evil influence, brightening eyes and benefiting wisdom, losing weight and prolonging life span.”
As recorded in the first medical masterpiece of Shennong's Classic of Materia Medica, “the ginseng has the function of nourishing the five internal organs, calming down the mood of dysphoria, comforting palpitation, enhancing intelligence, brightening up eyes and benefiting wisdom, as well as losing weight and prolonging life span.”
China's first classic of pharmacology, the "Shennong Bencao Jing" records that ginseng is efficacious in nourishing the five internal organs [heart, liver, spleen, lungs, kidneys], calming the mind and spirit, countering nervous palpitations, warding off unhealthy influences, brightening the eyes, benefitting the wits, assisting weight reduction, and increasing longevity.

Sentence 3: 千百年来,人参被誉为草药珍品。
For thousands of years, ginseng has been honored as precious herb which can make people immoral.
Over thousands of years, the ginseng has been honored as a precious herb.
Right down through the ages, gingeng has enjoyed a reputation as a herb-treasure.

[ immoral -> immortal ]


 
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