Jun 19, 2007 21:08
16 yrs ago
English term
Peru
Russian-Spanish sworn translator
Native in: Spanish
Works in: Russian to Spanish, French to Spanish, Italian to Spanish, and 5 more.
He saw holiness plainly befote him everywhere
English to Spanish
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Religion
MUSIC
Texto religioso
Proposed translations
(Spanish)
Proposed translations
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17 mins
Kathleen Shelly
Native in English
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Spanish
Specializes in field
Prompt...Precise...Polished
Native in: English 
, Spanish
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish to English
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En todas partes veía ante sí manifiesta la santidad.
In this phrase in English, I feel that there is great emphasis on "everywhere." I would put that at the beginning to make it more important in the Spanish phrase. It also makes for a more poetic rhythm. If you read it out loud you will see what I mean. The poetic feel is augmented by the placement, not of an adverb, but of an adjective before the noun.
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María Teresa Taylor Oliver
: I like your use of "manifiesta".
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Gracias!
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Cándida Artime Peñeñori
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Gracias!
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Simon Rogic
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "gRACIAS. Luisa."
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3 mins
Michael Powers (PhD)
United States
United States
Native in English
United States
US Court Cert. 1980 Ph.D. 1981
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, Portuguese to English, English to Spanish, and 2 more.
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72
vio lo sagrado en su presencia en todas partes
Mike :)
+1
5 mins
Cecilia Gowar
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in Spanish
United Kingdom
I read the Alethiometer
Native in: Spanish
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish to English, French to Spanish, and 1 more.
veía la santidad claramente ante sí, en todos lados
O vió... habría que tener un poco más de contexto.
6 mins
vio la santidad claramente frente a él en todas partes
Espero te ayude.
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24 mins
Marina Herrera
Native in English
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Spanish
Specializes in field
1.2 million words translated in 2010
Native in: English , Spanish
Works in: French to English, Spanish to English, English to Spanish
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Claramente veía la santidad por doquier; o La santidad siempre estaba ante el
Si es para ponerlo dentro de una composición musical mi sugerencia tiene el mismo número de sílabas musicales. Creo que no es necesario decir before him en español; se sobre entiende en "por doquier o en la segunda versión se entiende con siempre.
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Kathleen Shelly
: Me encanta el "doquier." Es mucho mejor que "en todas partes."
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Gracias, Kathleen. Vi que decía música bajo religión. Por eso traté de ofrecer algo que tuviera el mismo número de sílabas y algo poético.
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