English to Chinese Marketing Marketing / Market Research marketing

Now it’s broken. Put up an attention grabbing TV campaign today and consumers won’t flock to the stores, but to the Internet. Their activity will leave a data trail, which your competitors will use to retarget your consumers with competing messages {before a purchase event can occur}.
现在，这种模式有缺陷。今天搞一场吸引眼球的电视营销活动，消费者不会涌向实体商店，而是涌向互联网。他们的活动会留下数据痕迹，而你的竞争对手{在消费者实际购买之前}，可以利用这些数据痕迹，传达颇具竞争力的营销信息，从而重新锁定你的消费者。

谢谢指正！