مشروع قانون

20:36 Sep 23, 2013 

Thanks for the clarification, Mr. Hamidi. However, my conclusion regarding your entry -above- is justified since you haven't "agreed" to my answer but chose to put a slightly different one elsewhere.
I appreciate that you just made your point clear, I can see that there's an agreement over three valid translations, so far.
Kindest regards

20:28 Sep 23, 2013 

Hello Noura: I think you misunderstood my explanation, because I agree with you on this 100%

09:46 Sep 23, 2013 

Thank you very much "Anishappy". I agree with your examples, obviously. Sometimes a peer comment is understood as being a "correction" rather than an "addition". And frankly, that's how I took Mr. Hamidi's comment, and responded accordingly.
Thanks again for enriching the discussion.

09:38 Sep 23, 2013 

Well, I have already seen the discussion. "Bill" is also common.
Bill: A draft of a proposed statute submitted to a legislature by one of its members for consideration and possible enactment. (Webster's New World Law Dictionary).

As for the expression "draft of law on...", it is quite common. You can ggogle it: e.g.: The Draft of Law on Foreigners and International Protection.
New draft of Law on General Administrative Procedure
Draft of law on......
I have even checked Larousse dictionary: projet de loi (draft of law).
Thank you

08:11 Sep 23, 2013 

Hello Mr. Hamidi, I don't see the need to break the term and "shake it" when we can use the solid and fluent option; the law's name goes simply in between "draft" and "law", like this:

"Impact Assessment of the Draft Environmental Tax Law in Vietnam"

http://www.ids.ac.uk/project/impact-assessment-of-the-draft-...

Kind regards,

03:33 Sep 23, 2013 

agree with "Draft of a law" This would have to be followed by the law which is being talked about. Ex: دراسة مشروع قانون التأمين الصحي