Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

it is not within you

English answer:

it is not something you are capable of doing

Added to glossary by Andrew Vdovin
Sep 17, 2014 09:56
9 yrs ago
English term

it is not within you

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
Without thinking I addressed her in truespeech.
"Salera, might I bespeak you? Human speech is difficult, and I know not if you have yet learned our own language."
She sat bolt upright, in the absolute image of Astonishment, and stared wide-eyed at me. Her speech instantly became all but incomprehensible. "How iss thiss done? Hwat iss this hyou ssay? I hear hyourr voice yet you haff not spoken!"
"Hadreshikrar, do you mean to say you have not bespoken this child?" I said, turning to Shikrar in amazement. "You, who are the first always to introduce younglings to truespeech!"
To my delight, he could not answer at first. It is not easy to surprise Shikrar, the Eldest of our Kindred, and it always pleased me when I was able to do so. "I—before she, before they were—oh, ldai, I have not even tried to bespeak her since she and her people awakened!" He turned to her, tenderly, and spoke quietly using the broadest kind of truespeech. "Lady Solera, I beg your pardon. My friend Akhor—Varien—told me that you could not hear him, but that was before you came into your own."
"Hwat iss thiss bespppeakking?" she asked him, her wings fluttering in her agitation.
"Calm yourself, little one," I said, trying to be as gentle as I could. "It is natural for our people. This is the Language of Truth, the language of the mind. With it, we may speak to one another when we are far apart, or when we are aloft and the wind will not carry sound between us."
"How isss it done?"
"It is done with thought, littling," said Shikrar calmly, and aloud. "Where most thought is scattered abroad, like clouds in the sky, truespeech is more like to a single star—focussed." He continued in truespeech. "This kind of speech, which we start with, may be heard by all who care to listen. It is the first kind we learn and the easiest to master. There is another kind, whereby we may speak only to one particular soul at a time." He paused a moment. "That usually takes some years to master, but you are not as young as you appear, I would guess. You might achieve that level of concentration much faster than is usual."
"How shall I do thiss?" she demanded.
"Let us begin slowly, and with a warning," said Shikrar, still speaking broadly. I managed not to laugh. I recognised the very words. It was the same speech he had given to every youngling he had ever taught. Teacher-Shikrar indeed!
"Thoughts are truth, and truespeech will reveal your inner thoughts, whether you want it to or no, until you have become accustomed to it. It is impossible to lie in this speech, for the lie will burn like a beacon, and in any case your underthought will give you away."
"Hwat iss to lie?" Salera asked, in all innocence.
Shikrar bowed. "It is to say that which is not so, little one," he said aloud. "Forgive me. I suspect ***it is not within you."***
She glanced at him shrewdly, for all her youth. "I suspect ***it is within me if it is within you,*** Master Shikrar. Though perhaps not yet." She gazed back at me. "I hwill try this truespeech. I cannot sshape my tongue around words sso well ass you." She bowed her head and closed her eyes in concentration.



Dear native English speakers!

It is an extract from a fantasy book about dragons. They can communicate with each other mentally, using so-called truespeech.
Here two old dragons (Shikrar and Idai) explains to a young dragon (Salera) what truespeech is and how it is used.

I can’t really understand what the asterisked phrase refers to. Is it supposed to mean that the young dragon cannot lie? Or that she is unable to use truespeech? Or something else, maybe?

Please advise!

Discussion

Andrew Vdovin (asker) Sep 22, 2014:
And yes - this text was originally written in English. Thank you Vilina.
Andrew Vdovin (asker) Sep 22, 2014:
Gee, I'm really at two minds here... Hmmmm...
Vilina Svetoslavova Sep 20, 2014:
I have to say.. I have to say I agree with you Andrew (and with Yasutomo). I think it refers to truespeech and lying is something not possible when you're using it. It is not about whether she could lie or not, obviously she is not aware of lying because she does not know about truespeech either. It is not within her. Yet. And also I don't think the accent should be on lying, anyway, but on truespeech. After all they want to teach the young dragon to use trueespeech not to lie!!
Is the original text written by an English writer or are you translating from a translation into English?
In any case, my suggestion is trust your own judgement, very often when you try to analyse you get entangled and gets unclear. No offense to any of the native speakers but as they will agree English expressions could have several meanings and different usage. So my suggestion would be to think what will be the best translation into your own language. And what makes more sense and what is more important: true or lie, at the end of the day.
Hope this helps.
Andrew Vdovin (asker) Sep 17, 2014:
I thought it was the second because later on Salera did try to beapeak in truespeach but could not do it.
Andrew Vdovin (asker) Sep 17, 2014:
Thanks a lot for your help!
So it does refer to lying, not to using truespeech? I thought it was rather the second, but, again, I am no native English speaker...

Responses

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12 mins
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it is not something you are capable of doing

And the second sentence:
If you are capable of it, I am capable of it too.
Peer comment(s):

neutral YanaG : That's obvious.. the question is whether it refers to lying or to ability of truespeech
5 mins
It seems obvious to me from the context that it refers to lying.
agree Helena Chavarria : Definitely. I started to answer but I don't have time to provide a decent explanation.
14 mins
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agree airmailrpl : -
16 mins
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agree Carol Gullidge : the following sentence along with the word "suspect" makes this meaning quite clear to me
33 mins
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agree Yvonne Gallagher
1 hr
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agree Phoenix III
3 hrs
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10 mins

Salera has not mastered the ability of truespeech

According to the given paragraphs, Master Shikrar is telling the young dragon (Salera) that she has not yet mastered the ability of truespeech; hence he's telling her that it (meaning the ability of truespeech) is not within you yet.
Note from asker:
That was my first thought, too, but then I doubted, so I asked this question... Anyway, most people here say it's about lying, so you and me seem to be wrong...
Peer comment(s):

agree Vilina Svetoslavova : I'm not a native English but think that the elder dragon refers to her ability of truespeech here. At first I thought that the young dragon is just not capable of lying. But where she says I will try this truespeech, I think this is what they refer to.
3 days 1 hr
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12 mins

Lying is not part of her.

Just to my understanding, the phrase refers to the fact that the act of "lying" is not part of the young Dragon's character. She was not taught and was not exposed to lie, so she doesn't understand what that means.

Therefore she replies that if it is within him, it will probably be within her as well, perhaps not now, but in the future as she grows up.
Peer comment(s):

agree Charles Davis : I think it means lying is not in her character rather than that she has not yet been taught how to do it, so "not part of her" expresses the idea. // Re. Gallagy's point: "in all innocence" doesn't usually mean feigned, and unlikely it means that here.
1 hr
agree Maria Fokin
1 hr
neutral Yvonne Gallagher : nothing to do with not being taught but with her innate character. And "in all innocence" suggests she is indeed well capable of lying as she is asking the question already knowing the answer...//It's an idiom. Can mean she was feigning innocence...
1 hr
"in all innocence is the author's intake on the source of her response. how would it imply on the fact that she already knows the answer? I reckon the opposite..
agree Ledja : The clue is right there. "She glanced at him shrewdly, for all her youth". She does not need a degree of shrewdness for truespeech, but for lying. And she follows with "Though perhaps not yet", which is to say she is unable to produce a lie just yet.
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